.............................................here yet --
...............................no silly poems
.............................................or trite
.......philosophical observations /
.........................................................nothing for you to
.................oogle over,
..............................gawk at,
....................................or make fun of
......with your attitude
...............................................of superior disdain
.............................................................(smart ass!) /
I got nothin'
.................for u
..................................................just yet,
..........but soon
.........................my words
................will come pouring out
.......faster than
.......................................you
................................can possibly
............read 'em /
nothing profound
..........or obfuscatory
...................... (a real word, I swear...
.......................................look it up if you don't
..................believe me!) /
...................................just loads of sheer
..............verbiage
...............................topped with a dollop
......................of sticky sweet
.....................sunshine and roses
to help it all go down /
...................................don't complain to me
..............about the quality of
.........................................the writing
....................here
.................................................if yr lookin' for
........................shakespeare,
...........................get off the damned internet
.......................and try picking up
...........................................................a book
.....................or somthin'! /
..............it won't
.........................kill you /
i
p r o m i s e
SEE YOU ON JANUARY 20!
AWWW_YEA, first comment.
ReplyDeleteI like how playing with the text can change the way the poem sounds and feels.
ReplyDeletei like the style and how you wrote everything out but my favorite part is at the end..love it!
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome post.. I could actually apply it to my life. You definitely have a way with words. But obfuscatory, really?? Tell Prof. Damian to eat that fancy word. ;)
ReplyDeletethat was great..i love how it was set up..very fun to read!
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