Friday, December 25, 2009

what 'ja lookin' at?

there's nothing
.............................................here yet --
...............................no silly poems
.............................................or trite
.......philosophical observations /
.........................................................nothing for you to
.................oogle over,
..............................gawk at,
....................................or make fun of
......with your attitude
...............................................of superior disdain
.............................................................(smart ass!) /
I got nothin'
.................for u
..................................................just yet,
..........but soon
.........................my words
................will come pouring out
.......faster than
.......................................you
................................can possibly
............read 'em /
nothing profound
..........or obfuscatory
...................... (a real word, I swear...
.......................................look it up if you don't
..................believe me!) /
...................................just loads of sheer
..............verbiage
...............................topped with a dollop
......................of sticky sweet
.....................sunshine and roses
to help it all go down /

...................................don't complain to me
..............about the quality of
.........................................the writing
....................here
.................................................if yr lookin' for
........................shakespeare,
...........................get off the damned internet
.......................and try picking up
...........................................................a book
.....................or somthin'! /

..............it won't
.........................kill you /

i
p r o m i s e




SEE YOU ON JANUARY 20!

5 comments:

  1. I like how playing with the text can change the way the poem sounds and feels.

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  2. i like the style and how you wrote everything out but my favorite part is at the end..love it!

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  3. That was an awesome post.. I could actually apply it to my life. You definitely have a way with words. But obfuscatory, really?? Tell Prof. Damian to eat that fancy word. ;)

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  4. that was great..i love how it was set up..very fun to read!

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